By the rising sun, whose flight each day paints the world
With mellow light, I swear that I have no complain
Nor any vengeance burning deep inside. I swear
There were no tears to bury when I buried the pain.
By the silver moon, whose shining light floods the plain
I swear that my eyes are never wet. By the sky
That damps the distant fields with heavy rain, I swear
Life’s still as gay as it was when we bade good-bye.
I vowed too . But those half moons of dark under my eyes gave me away and those tears I had promised to hold back become run-offs when I least want them to.
Your poem reflects resilience and strength:)
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it was more like an auto suggestion for me to make those give aways to go away… the point is life’s still as gay but how gay it was earlier?
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very positive..
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thank you!
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Very poignant and life still remains gay… even after the pain… Loved your words “There were no tears to bury when I buried the pain” and could feel it all..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
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thanks a lot!
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like a grey storm.
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Beautiful!! Wonderful job.
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thanks for such kind words!
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This is poetry.
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I am honored! thank you!
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you got it right this time by your poem..
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rather poignant…
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I liked it Amit but there is lot more to go.. and come on your way.. so enjoy it as it comes… I liked your verse… thanks for sharing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
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relax yourself,
Glad that no complaints or tears…
lovely poem,
beautiful sentiments.
xx
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This old world is still going to spin around even after we’re gone isn’t it?
Shedding pain and burying it without any tears could be quite a job.
I guess if I was to tell my self something and truly mean it I could put it aside
but would it not still hurt somewhere even if it was deep in the ground?
You propose lots of thought with such a beautiful poem …I love the way you describe the two different lights as well.
Take care and peace be with you
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