Though my tears are too transparent to see,
must you never look for it on my chin?
Must you never feel how the raging wind
change its color and the wild smell, outside
from sunny yellow to a gloomy grey,
from fire to earth when touched by drops of rain?
Have you ever wondered why the clouds cry?
Who fills them to their brims with tears and why?
You must look southward, look towards the sea!
There, in its saline depth you shall find me,
along its length and breadth you can discern
my tears as foamy waves on the run!
Yes, I know my tears were too transparent to see
but had you ever sought them, even in your dreams?
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Those crystal clear tears which save the soul, sometimes are the hardest to notice.. you’ve taken them to a higher level my dear friend! What a beautiful poem!
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I am so often confused, which is more enjoyable, writing the poem or reading your appreciations? my sincerest gratitude!
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Your poems land on the fields of my soul like rose petals…
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I hope to publish my second collection of poems in 2016 from Amazon. it will be dedicated to you. you have my sincerest words.
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Oh my… you’ve touched the heart of me.. such a splendid soul you are!
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“to Dajena Mason, an esteemed reader who makes me feel like a true poet.” any corrections?
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🙂 yes — you don’t need me to be a true poet, for you ARE!
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ok. still the history would know that it was you who broke the news to me! 🙂 if I make history in the future! :p
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I will be clapping on the sidelines! 🙂
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Well, unfortunately if I am alive and present in that future, you will not have the fortune of evading the center stage. I can count on myself.
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Oh my.. you humble me, and leave me once again speechless. Thank you!
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and on second thought, even if I am, being a poet and feeling like one are different. 😀
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Your transparent words, show the depth of your heart!
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the depth of heart is indeed one of the few things I truly crave. so this has reverberated a very memorable note through my world, which I shall cherish for the rest of my life and perhaps in my grave too if that happens to be possible.
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Blushing.. all the way up to the moon..
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no wonder, the moon was scarlet last night. btw, one of these days I have to compile your comments and publish a poem titled, “Ode to A Poet from His Mentor Friend”… they are way too tempting. My sincerest regards!
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The generosity with which you welcome my humble offerings of opinions makes me feel like I have touched the stars!
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and I feel as if I have been touched by a star! I suppose you do not use Facebook. If you do, I am @ https://www.facebook.com/gwrahman
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ahh.. sparkling.. 😀
I have an old account but I have not been using it in a long time… I honestly do not have too much time on my hands right now..
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😀 I have already sent you a friend request….. but that request has no other appointments, so it can wait indefinitely.
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thanks!
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Wonderful!
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thanks a lot!
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