I have no strings attached to life,
I do not know if it’s a weakness or a strength!
In the beginning with the world I tried
but all I shed was my blood and tears too!
The world seemed full of lust and greed and ignorance,
with no spirits but the organs and libidos!
Then I tied the knots with the sun, I think
or thought I did but O, the arrogance,
evaporating my strings in a flash,
leaving me to drift through the universe!
So, all I am left with now is the moon,
both the world beneath the sun and the sun at nights!
This time I know, this is my strength,
for one needs no strings to live a lunatic’s life!
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So intriguing, the way you write 🙂
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thanks a lot! hope you find some more of my works equally enjoyable!
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Your poem Amit, always sharpen my reading skills. A compact and fully dependent on your personal life, one of a kind moon anthem. I really enjoyed your transition from earth to the sun and then back to the sky, this time for the Luna.
In love with the moon, we are all lunatics 😀
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Well, I dearly hope that the complete dependency on my personal life did not hinder the compatibility of the poem! And sharpening the reading skill of a poet like you!!! It heightens my perception of modesty that pure human beings like you are capable of… but most importantly, thanks again for your generosity!
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OH no, on contrary, it is always inspirational to read pieces that hold segments of your life. 🙂
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I have just posted another for you, titled, “A Synthesis” it is my poor effort to unite Socrates (my Guardian Angel) and Semitic faiths (my religion). hope it is not too lacking in quality.
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awwww, going to take a look. 🙂
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am honored!
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🙂
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it is beautifully said !
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thanks a lot!
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i am honored!
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