Perhaps I was not made in pairs!
Perhaps God is saving me for Himself!
Perhaps it is nothing but destiny,
which I could override if it was preordained!
As I let my life fade away,
the blood from my veins renders the world red,
with dreams, too fanciful but unrequited,
scattering rebel sparks around the universe!
Am I the lost city of Atlantis,
gone forever from the world of senses,
though still alive in remembrance,
in words and sparse thoughts, in sunrise and summer wind,
when Poseidon, the trident wielding god of sea,
rose up in roars from the ocean’s depth and drowned me?
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WOW!! Atlantis, waiting to be found.
I always stand in admiration of the way you view Mythology and Legends, and how you weave them skillfully through the fabric of life and who we are.
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I believe ancient folklore and myth are one of the basic memes defining our overall attitude to the reality.
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And I believe you have an answer for everything 😀 😀
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You are the mentor! How can I ever refute you! 😀
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You need no mentor my friend, you are a natural!
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you know there is an adage in Sufism, those that have no mentor are mentored by the devil himself.
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oh my.. if you put it like this..
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but you don’t have to ponder for so long, you know a disciple like me wont let you down! 😀
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I never doubted you 😀
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to Enlightenment then!
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😀 😀
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Absolute perfection. Beautifully worded.
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thanks a lot!
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wow why have I not stumbled upon your blog before? My life has been all the poorer for it. Love the dramatic design of your site (I love the color red). The whole poem is epic and fantastic but that middle stanza is lyric gold my new friend.
“with dreams, too fanciful but unrequited,
scattering rebel sparks around the universe!” — what an image that is! It tantalized the imagination. I wish I wasn’t at work. This is sparking ideas. 🙂
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I am completely speechless in delight and honor by your exuberant review… thanks a lot for liking my poem!
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You’re welcome. You are a talented poet my friend. Fear not, you have your own lyricism unique to you and it is quite awesome. 🙂
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so do you… but Taming My Blush was an exceptional one.
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She is an exceptional lady, who writes in a manner I can’t ever hope to equal but that’s ok because I am a storyteller at heart.
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yes, I have noticed you prefer to write longer poems. I have a few essays too… but I am a poet at heart.
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I tell stories, sometimes in poetic form and sometimes in prose. I admire those who are poets at heart. They have many stories to tell while, I have just the one with many faces and places. 😀
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let us agree to disagree on that… stories are poems too, with more lenient meters.
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quite true but for most poems, the story ends with the poem and a new one begins with the next poem. That is something I don’t do; each poem I write is part of a sequence, a greater story. 😀
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yes a new story begins with each of my poem but are they not all parts of a greater story too? Although Eliot refuted his claim in the later stages of his life but I concur with his earlier claim that all of us are merely expressing different facets of the same great story, of humanity.
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That I agree with that! 😀 Of course my story is an epic fantasy. I’m quite certain he didn’t mean that.
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no he did not from my understanding as well … I like the epic fantasies by Abercrombie … his First Law trilogy
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I haven’t read those yet. I have one of the audio books from the series but my coworker told me to listen to another book before reading that one. So it’s on my to listen to list.
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I loved it …. the trilogy … could not get my hands on his another piece “Best Served Cold” … I have tried audiobooks of the antiquity from Librivox.org … it has been a new and pleasant experience for me.
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I haven’t tried librivox.org. I usually buy audio books through Audible.com. I have over a 1000. Thanks for the suggestion! I’m going to check them out after lunch.
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librivox is free…. you have an enviable collection for sure.
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They have lots of sales and I’ve been a member for years. So it adds up.
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hats off!
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Earplugs in! 😀
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hahahahahaha…..
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😀
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I meant earphones…sigh…multitasking…
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so you have a quantum processor in you?
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I wish! That would make the multitasking easier!
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yes… much easier than a binary one
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yes thanks to those quanta and their perpetual state of flux!
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I left IT in the pre-quantum era …. had only windows 2000 server back then 😀
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Quantum computing it’s still all theory.
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I told you I have been out of touch for more than a decade now…. thanks for the enlightenment 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂 I think it will be a while before quantum commuting is a reality– at least a decade maybe more
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wish I could lay my hands on one before leaving the world.
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you and me both! We have time though whether it will be enough time for the scientists to figure out how to build the technology to make such a computer a reality remains to be seen.
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😀 let us see if those scientists are up to the challenge or not.
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exactly. last article I read they still had significant challenges to overcome 🙂
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I wish them all the luck in this universe!
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me too they’re going to need it. Maybe after this, they can figure out how to retrieve data from a black hole 🙂 It’s theoretically possible, so saith Hawking and he’s the man. 😉
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but did he not also say that we need to minimize the amount of entropy at the outer rim of a black hole to be able to retrieve meaningful data ?
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he might have I was thinking of an article I read recently that talked about how black holes do emit something–I can’t recall what that something is, but from their emission, the spin state and mass of a given object that fell in could be arrived at by some truly hellacious math. It was in Nature the article….
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well, most of it looked like English :p need to do some digging though.
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no worries, I had you covered 🙂 browser history is my best friend. 🙂
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hats off and spectacles on!
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yes! 😀 Iike that saying!
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😀
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here it is! Quantum Teleportation can retrieve some data from a black hole:
http://qubitsnews.com/2016/01/09/quantum-teleportation-can-retrieve-information-from-a-black-hole/
I knew it had somewhere 🙂
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thanks for digging it up for me… my gratitude!
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I follow that blog on here; it keeps me up to date on things that fascinate me. 🙂
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but as I was thinking though retrieving data from qubit is possible, how would one observe it without forcing the bit to change its state?
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I wonder that every time I read about quantum computing. Not one article has explained how that would work. I’m not sure if scientists have an answer yet for that.
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yes, they say they are going to measure it without looking at it, who knows how that will be possible!
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I don’t think it is. How can you measure something and not observe it while measuring it? Sounds like a paradox wrapped in an enigma to me 🙂
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yes it is, a paradox within an enigma!
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which is why we have a long wait for a quantum pc 😦
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😀
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