My heart bled like a melting sheet of ice,
as Spring encroached over the wilderness,
thawing the frozen rivers back to life
but I felt like the fading winter days!
Perhaps the ruthless chill had kept me warm,
by feeding me just enough to survive
but in Spring my dreams did grow back and thrived
to melt down and head again for the sea!
Then I thought I had vowed to be the sun
(and all it ever truly did was burn,
even when absurd human thoughts had claimed
that it revolved around the earthly plains),
despite seeing how often human fears were unleashed,
whenever the humble sun was, by shadows, eclipsed!
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Wow….. Really enjoyed…. I like it…. Keep blogging and stay connected
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thank you
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You are welcome amit, your stuff really touches the heart
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Such endorsement from one whose blog is called BlogBuster is a great relief indeed. I am humbled!
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Hi, nice day to see every your wonderful post. And good news (if you want to join) 3 days quote challenge. You can see the rules here: https://imajinesstories.wordpress.com/2016/02/01/3-days-3-quotes-challenge-3-day-1/ 🙂
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As expected i am always in awe everytime you publish a poem. This one is beautiful… i love the last line.
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you are too kind!
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Its not being kind… its simply stating the fact that i actually am really a fan of your poems
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ok…. but to me the fans of my poetry are the kindest person in this world.
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Oh i see i get it.. i must be kind then.. keep writing
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thanks a lot and yes you are!
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When I was reading through your poems, only one momentary regret was subsiding in me, ” I hope one day even He starts following my blog”
I was still sinking in awe of the poems, and then the notification popped up…Amit Rahman is following your blog… I am honoured and flattered you did that! Thank you Sir! And words are Just mere compliments for your poems..They are Beautiful!
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I am honored that you found my following you to be a matter of such significance. Thank you!
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But dont you see, if the poet cannot burn in his/her emotions, the reader will never feel the warmth of those words. We burn therefore we are! Burn away, Poet! Let thee light shine through the eclipses.
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may the sandalwood flowers rain down on your kind words!
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I see your cyclical theme again. Surely Spring does come again and with it, new life, new promises and a new scent in the air. 🙂
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but I miss living in the 1790s
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🙂 you are such a wondrous soul!
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thanks and you are welcome and of course I am honored!
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🙂
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😀
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Upon reading this, the word Primordial popped into my head…connecting and disconnecting with Creation and trying to understand…or not? where you “are” right now…I feel the grey matter tingling once more!
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I was reading about impressionism and expressionism while musing about how history repeats itself, globally as well as individually… ended up writing this poem.
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Ah that’s where tautology comes in and yes, we often end up falling into the same pothole even when we are aware that it is there. Ah cyclical repetition…it takes great discipline to walk another path…
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yes it does!
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