I daresay this is a Nonet of Nonets (a series comprised of nine Nonets). I am grateful to Dajena Mason for introducing me to the form. This being my first attempt at the form is dedicated to her for the same reason. I hope you find the resulting madness enjoyable!
Hear the tale of my birth, O Calliope,
and decide, whether the choices
I made then were wrong or right,
for the path that I took
all those years ago
has brought me where
I stand now
on this
day!
I arrived in darkness of the night,
and saw four faces in a line,
in pairs, the first man was tall
and dark but his woman
was all glittering
then a woman
stood with her
husband,
Greed.
Death made a promise when I was born,
until my time has come I won’t
be dead in fear even once.
I stood at Tiananmen
square in ‘Eighty Nine
and stopped a tank!
History?
Perhaps
not!
History will remember Hitler,
Alexander, Lincoln and Mao,
men that drenched the world with blood
for a cause, either good
or bad, depending
on which side, you
are standing,
of the
wall.
History has always been the tale
of victors and their victory,
of power-mongers and their
mongering with our blood.
The vanquished are left
for the poets’ care,
for poetry
tells their
tale.
With the promise from Death secured, I
turned to Honor, the next in line
and she made a promise too,
her fame will not lure me
ever in my life,
I would rather
love the truth
and simple
things!
The next in line was humble Poverty,
and the moment I saw her face
I knew nothing could surpass
the truth of her beauty
in the universe.
So at her feet
I pledged my
forlorn
heart.
She took it and marked me as her own,
albeit not without a deep frown
from the last figure in line,
Greed with a long face sighed
and cursed me as such,
“Thine urge to know
shall be thy
tragic
flaw!”
Thus when I was born Death and Honor,
Poverty and Greed stood in line
to bless me but I ended up
with two promises from
the first couple, a curse
from the fourth one
and true love
from his
wife!
.
* In poetry, a nonet is a nine line poem, with the syllable count going down from 9 to 1.
You made it look so easy so I’ll have to try writing one 🙂
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🙂 you are most welcome to try and I believe this one can be easily outdone by you. best of luck!
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very cool visual style 😎
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thanks a lot!
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Amit,
Your talent does not need more times to produce excellent pieces. Loved it!! 🙂
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you are one of the best confidence boosters in the world…. 😀 thank you!
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splendid use of the form and maintenance of the tone and tenor of the expression through the multiple stanza. brilliant piece.
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thanks a lot! I am humbled!
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Brilliant use of form! I love these lines: “History has always been the tale
of victors and their victory,
of power-mongers and their
mongering with our blood.
The vanquished are left
for the poets’ care,
for poetry
tells their
tale.” They’re so true! Those lines should emblazon a t shirt
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I am indebted to your exuberance, yet again! 😀
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It was my pleasure 🙂
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it is and will always be my honor!
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An honor you execute with skill and grace 😉
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ahem! :p does it make me a skilled executioner? 😀
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A headsman of the highest quality and regard 😉
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😀 ok I concede
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We had a contest? 😉
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I conceded to your eloquence 😉
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You retain your crown as king of friendly banter 🙂
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as you say Madam High Priestess!
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😀
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Wow! never heard of nonets… This blogosphere is teaching me a lot, hope I learn them well.
Your poems always inspire me to write poems… 🙂
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that is a huge honor for me
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I had to read this a few times and then some more…a veritable masterpiece in the classical style…”so at her feet I pledged my forlorn heart”…of Poverty, this and so many more lovely gem-words within this Masterpiece. Awesome!
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thank you so very much! this being my first attempt your kind review will surely boost my confidence. I am grateful for that.
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It really was masterful writing Amit!
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ok my dear, I admit. Being kind does not mean what you said was not true… :p
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