This is my first attempt at the poetic form named after one of my favorite Mathematicians of all time. I hope you will be lenient with my mistakes! Thanks Dajena for introducing me to this, like so many other poetic forms!
When
An
Arrow,
Venom tipped
Flew toward me from
The chaos ahead, of existence,
I mistook it for Cupid’s but it was Apollo’s!
Too swift it came and pierced my heart,
Soon my love was dead
And shortly
Then, so
Was
I!
.
great job! Great poem, this is a new form.
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thank you! as admitted I learned it from the form maestro Dajena.
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thank you!
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Look at this! You are such a clever poet my friend! You put your heart at the tip of your pen and make us feel as readers like we are set on fire by your words! WOW!
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the credit is yours. I learned this form exclusively from your blog!
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I am humbled, yet you are the one that puts words on paper 😀
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as it has been for ages… was it not Plato who put the words of Socrates on paper? 😀
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we can never do it alone 😀
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cheers to being comrades!
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Cheers my friend! 😀
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and to all for one and one for all too!
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As long as I can be D’artagnan! 😀
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he is my top favorite too but as you have claimed it earlier, I think my life is more akin to that of Athos!
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😀 😀 cheers than!
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cheers! I am raising my glass of natural O2
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Very nice try!
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thank you!
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Nicely done
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thank you for sharing it!
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🙂
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thanks a lot!
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that is interesting and a good challenge
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thank you~
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you let me try to make a poem with these mathematical specifications, although the syllables and phonemes are different in Spanish.
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please go ahead! reading it will be my pleasure!
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