to Dajena Mason
It
is my
humble effort
to wish an angel
from the Adriatic
shore to mark the
auspicious day of her
birth that made the
world a little
less darker
than it was before! This I know firsthand, how she lights up the world
with her kind words and deeds like the sun on hazy days or the moon
in dark nights! And that is merely the tip of her numerous virtues
and skills, the most gifted and versatile poetess in this realm of
all the blogging quills! What can the likes of me, a mere erring
mortal man, wish for her, the very incarnation of Artemis on
planet earth, except these mediocre whispers that say,
may she enjoy a memorable
and a very
Happy
B
I
R
T
H
D
A
Y
!
*This is my first attempt at concrete poetry and as I have never been an artist, I hope you will be lenient to the distorted output. To Dajena, I apologize for its’ premature birth. I hope you will not find it too irksome!
wow, move over hallmark an make way for concrete, colorful birthday tributes/poems!
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well, materially they are much cheaper, I know but spiritually they are more enchanting, I hope!
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🙂 they are
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now I think they doubly are from your endorsement!
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🙂 could be
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it is!
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Reblogged this on MOONSKITTLES and commented:
The beauty and the sentiments of this poem, made my heart aflutter and definitely my skittles all ablush! What a generous gesture from my dear friend Amit.
I am humbled, honored and I love it!
Faleminderit shume miku im!
🙂
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I know the effect of a poem being shared on your blog, so I am in the seventh heaven now!
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Oh WOW Amit!! What a beautiful flower to find in this morning! I feel the birds are singing prettier and the skies are shining brighter because of you my friend! This is such a gorgeous concrete poem and I feel humbled to have received the first fruit of this labor. I absolutely love the form and the photograph is making my smile uncontrollable!! You made my day!!! Thank you! Thank you!!
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*in my inbox 😀 😀
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I am relieved now… and honored too and thanks for overlooking the prematurity! may you have a very good day!
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…the abstract form is most refreshing and since the words come from the heart I am sure this gift will be embraced with much joy! A most bespoke poem spoken with much sincerity. 🙂
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thank you for bolstering my gift!
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…always good to have a well-filled bolster! 🙂
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Lovely tribute to a beautiful lady! Happy birthday my dear Dajena!
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:p it’s premature 😦 her birthday isn’t even in the next 72 hours…
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Hahaha. No matter. I’m sure she will love your gift ☺️
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thanks a lot! I am anxious though until she does… and sadly I intended it to be a flower but the white spaces and the alignments came out all wrong… so settled on a torch but ended up with an “I don’t know what” (I have already nicknamed it a concrete embarrassment) 😉
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Your efforts really showed. ☺️ Don’t be too hard on yourself!
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thank you my dear friend and comrade!
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Always!
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and if you have time, kindly let me know what you think of my latest piece!
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Done!
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my gratitude!
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Awesome,
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thank you!
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