Dedicated to thatmishmash
As the evening on its’ trepid steps approached,
a subtle melancholy spread its’ wings too,
(who knows from Hades or the Elysium)
the gush of wind from their fluttering tinged my soul!
If I were a streetlight with sodium in my heart,
it was about time to start glowing red
and wait in silent anticipation
of the thrilling onset of night across my world!
If I were a bird far away from my dear home,
for sustenance, both my own and others’,
the time was nigh for me to turn around
and flap my wings to the opposite direction!
O but I’m neither a diurnal bird nor a sodium light,
in fact, to know myself I’m still in a perpetual fight!
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The sonnet left me spellbound. This was amazing. You’ll find yourself, Amit. 🙂 Keep writing such masterpieces.
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thank you for such generous encouragements! I hope you find more of my posts enjoyable!
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I am looking forward to reading your posts. You do have a mighty collection on your blog!
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:p I had no idea that would grow this much!
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Yeah. It’s like a reservoir full now. You can go, take a dip into your past feelings, anytime you want.
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yes, it’s like going through an old album, with stored emotions and faces!
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Must be a wonderful feeling. I do hope I can amount to something like that in the future.
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of course you can… I barely managed to trickle for 6 years and you can see the end result!
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Thanks, Amit. You have fueled my motivation to do so. 🙂
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then you have an honesty fueled motivation! go ahead!
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Woaw!
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thank you for the reaction!
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Am not able to get words, It’s simply so wow Amit!
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because it is written for an angel of kindness and generosity!
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Indeed! Am a big big fan of both of you. Stay blessed 🙏😇
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great to know that… 😉 with the summer approaching more fans I have the better it will be, no? 😀
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Noooo with the increasing heat I doubt if even Aircon would be effective this summer 😉
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well, aircons have so soul, my fans do 😉
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Witty 👏👏👏
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😀 you are kind!
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Awwww Thank you Thank you!
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Just realized that was a feminine response.
Thank you 🙂
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don’t you know I am Tiresias, the blind wretch with wrinkled female breast?
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This is cheating, picked up out of the syllabus 😜
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but I am s/he, a follower of Ardhanarishwar
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Amit Thanks a ton for making me smile today, when I am grieving in pain for the loss of a fast friend.
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Well, fast friends they just come and go
it’s the rain that will wash you clean, you know! (a parody of the Corrs)
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Friends don’t just come and go, it’s us who choose them from our acquaintances to befriend and share our personal space with them.
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yes, true!
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Save all the praise and accolades for the one truly deserving . For the pen that inspires and a soul that sings divine songs. I am too profane and he too sacred.
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yeah right!
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That was for Dhiraj. Bad boy you !
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my ‘pologies!
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I know I am right ….haha . Thank you for being in agreement 🙂
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I think my skills in irony are fading 😀
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…..lol. charmer !
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😀 an angel-charmer, wow, what a compliment!
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With a charmer like you , I would be happy to be angel , happy to be anything hat inspires a few words from your heart. Anything really . Until yesterday I was wondering why ……now am greedily wondering why not ? You are making my heart soar .
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why? – what are friends for! why not? – absolutely, why not! let it soar past the atmospheric haze and take a look at the vastness of the universe!
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That’s mesmerizing!
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This poet here is mesmerising and magical ! Am sure you will agree with me , Dhiraj . And as sorry about your friend .
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Indeed he is 🙂
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Thank you Dhiraj 🙂
ÀR, I rest my case now . Hugs
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Thanks to you too 🙂
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😀 the judge tells me, he has overruled your objection and accepted all your pleas as self defense 😉
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I give up . You are going to rewrite that twinkling reality that I thought was permanently etched in the firmament. For once , I see a friend who I am beginning to believe won’t leave my side. This time I want to be right A. Am sticking my neck out and saying it.
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I want you to be right as well!
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Am scared but your friendship is worth the risk . Am taking it . Hold on though , I don’t want to fall this time .
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you won’t, rest assured! friendship is never plagued by heartbreaks!
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:p
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You are going to make me sprout wings where there are none and a halo above my horns 🙂
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you mean to say the angel will come out of its undercover garbs?
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At least you acknowledge there is a garb then ? Have you been looking through the dark recesses and have stumbled upon those cinders that bear witness to some holy fire that once burned within her ?
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by garb I mean attire/dress… the holy fire still burns within her, have no doubt!
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I know what you meant . It is surprising that the warmth of that light has transcended borders and someone so far has sensed it when no many around here can.
I feel like driftwood now , lying aimlessly on a shore , until a beachcomber found beauty in her and made her a piece of art ( another poem idea !!!) With all my love Gaia
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thank you!
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ah! the flight to self-discovery. Fantastic poem. I love this one. 🙂
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🙂 thank you!
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You’re welcome my friend. 🙂
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Good luck with that flight to self discovery !
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🙂 merci, mon ami!
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☺😊
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P.S I intend to fight though, not flight
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You’d need a bit of both I reckon. 😜
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yes, that is true and therein lies my problem… flight has always been too unnatural for me, albeit, I have taken enough flights too!
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When it’s time , you’ll adapt and choose wisely , I can tell 🙂
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I hope so too (but often in vain) :p
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If you can try changing what’s written in the stars , you ‘ll do this too , no ?
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of course I will!
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Hugs .
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a billion fold on your way~!
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