Dedicated to Melinda Kucsera,
for her interest in the Quantum Theory
Am I not like an atom in every way,
predictable and intuitive on the face of it
but defying shreds of common senses at the core?
Am I not everywhere unless I am pinned,
wriggling at a certain spot by an observer,
on the illusory fabric of space and time?
Come and figure me if you can without a change
to myself through your mensuration either in
my future afterwards or in your past, before!
And only being an atom can aptly explain,
why no matter how the time is, bitter or sweet
I am always filled with an emptiness inside!
So, yes an atom, that is me, tiny and charged,
with the mystery of creation etched in my heart!
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That is a work of art. *-*
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thanks a lot!
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Most welcome.
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Beautifully expressed
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thank you!
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😊
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Hey amit! Really Well written! I love the last stanca! I normally don’t like scientific stories or poems but this is an exception! Good job!
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thanks a lot!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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🙂
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Oh this is a beautiful poem, and written for such a perfect person! loved it! 🙂
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I am honored to find a group of perfect, kindhearted and phenomenal poets through you. So you have my utmost gratitude!
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I enjoyed this poem!
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thanks a lot!
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Beautifully written amit..
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thanks a lot!
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A great piece, Amit…yes, we are all like that atom.
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Thanks a lot, man!
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You are welcome!
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😀
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This is fantastic. Thank you for the dedication. You have perfectly captured the essence of quantum theory (and its vagaries of which, I’m sure you know are many and varied). 🙂
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The theory and its implications are fascinating… and I am grateful to Prof. Jim Al-Khalili for my knowledge.
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Great/thought writing, cool image 🙂
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thank you!
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