Why am I drawn to the light like a moth,
whether it’s from the moon or synthetic?
How long must a moth be fooled by light bulbs
before it can tell the real from the fake?
A misunderstood mouse flying on fingers
fares a whole lot better at nights than me,
despite being almost blind, it has its’ words,
high pitched, painting flawless the world around!
Unlike a cicada I have no ultrasound,
so I need a route unpolished by Eve, Adam
and their descendants, plotting for prosperity
or I’ll always be fooled by the lure of their lights!
But then, even if I could reach the moon I would have known,
the light that brought me there from earth had never been her own!
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It’s beautiful!! U really a magician with words
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that is very kind and generous of you! thanks!
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Yeah, like moths – we are attracted to the darndest things. Bright light. Gorgeous words. Are they real? I don’t know. Are we the only one being fooled? Probably not. Beautiful poem, my friend 🙂
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🙂 it is said there are always two sides of the story… so may be even the electric bulbs think that the moths are fooling them by not being angels drawn to their light… they are sadly true… for the light of the moon had never been her own!
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I like your POV. Electric bulbs thinking they are angels! Who’s fooling who, hmm? ☺️
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I was kinda hoping to get an answer from you… I am the one in fix here 😀
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What was the question again? Sorry I missed it. ☺️ can’t promise you that I would get you out of there. Feel better, maybe ☺️
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🙂 no worries, the question is who is fooling whom… the bulbs because the moths take them for the moon or the moths because the bulbs take them for angels?
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Depends. Were I the moth, and I’d been hurt, I’d say the bulbs had fooled me. ☺️
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that is so biased of you and I cannot help but feel honored that you chose to side with your friend… thank you!
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Ah, my friend is the moth too? So that was him I saw flying near me. 😀
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(nodding in slow motion)
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😀 I couldn’t find an emoji of a moth but I found one of a bee. I hope you will accept it >> 🐝
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I love bees, even when they sting! because all they are doing is trying to defend their habitat and next generation by sacrificing their lives… what can be more heroic than that? thanks a lot!
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You’re welcome!
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🙂
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Beautiful and special words.
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thanks a lot!
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Beautiful, Amit!
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am honored that you found it so! thanks!
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🙂
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that’s the biggest smiley I have seen in WP so far! 😀
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Hahahahahaha! (and now, the loudest laugh!)
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😀
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So meaningful, lovely!
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😀 thanks!
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This is a painful tale my friend. Your ability to make the reader connect with your poetry is unique. I think more than the light, that moth looks for a bit of warmth..
May you have a beautiful day my friend and I hope you slept a bit more 😀 😀
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🙂 thanks for such warm words! Yes I have for recently I have discovered there is nothing more blissful than the peace of sleep… 😀 but is it not the hour of the owl around you?
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😀 😀 best affair! It is waaaay beyond my sleep time. But the first day of work after vacation is always hard to go to bed. It is 11:45 pm 🙂 and I should bid you night night from this side of the world.
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so in your words, see you at the other side! sweet dreams! may you have a happy working week ahead, while saving daylights as well!
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🙂 It was a great sleep, thank you!
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you are welcome!
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🙂
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don’t know why, I find the updated (and bigger) smileys in WP quite humbling…
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hahaha, it is as big as my head lol
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ok 😀 but the head of Artemis is not as plain as that!
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thank goodness, not yellow either lol
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😀 here it comes as the color of the sun!
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😀
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🙂
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Its beautiful and so real! delusion in illusions!
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thank you Soumya!
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