But what if I said, “No, it is not just your poems
I admire, it is you in your entirety!”
instead of the silence I sent your way,
what would you have done or said in reply?
Perhaps such shocks have grown too mundane already
for one as elegant and full of charms as you
and bards like me roam the world in millions,
so would you have swallowed hard and unfollowed me?
I have seen you when moonlight rained down from the sky
glowing like a camellia or an eglantine,
the way you paled a rogue dawn with your blush
and the Sun’s golden hue with a spark of your smile!
But it’s better to leave some doubts unanswered for
and some others yet, unquestioned, forevermore!
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….blessed is the head , heart and hand that worked in perfect harmony to write something so eloquent that it leaves the heart wanting to hear more 🙂 and truly blessed is the one who inspired such words . This is divine , simply divine ,
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whenever you come across something beautiful, please remember that it is most often the beauty of sadness and also that our blessings are often analogous with the curses we have on us.
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I meant only praise . I know most beauty stems from pain. Am sorry for the compliment if you think I didn’t understand the pain.
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of course not…. I know you mean only praise… I was just pointing out that with enough heat, pressure and time even peanut butter can be transformed into diamonds. 😀
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Really… .. so beautiful…. Amit really your poem makes me happy….
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thanks a lot!
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Always welcome my friend Amit
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It’s an honor knowing you!
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☺
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…paled a rogue dawn with your blush… I am running out of adjectives to describe the beauty of your poems. 💟
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and I to describe the breadth of my gratitude! thanks a lot my dear friend!
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Oh my! This is just too beautiful Amit! I absolutely loved the contrast you have brought in the poem. The juxtaposition of the two forces and the open book – heart that is ready to be read.
-Dajena 🙂
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thanks a lot again for bestowing beauty on the piece from your eyes!
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Your poem is a true beauty! 🙂
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yes, modeled after that of the beholder’s eyes in this case!
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“so would you have swallowed hard and unfollowed me?” — I hope not! I hope she would have followed thee 😉 A great poem my friend.
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you have an angel’s heart!
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but not an angel’s wings…oh well, maybe next lifetime I’ll get that upgrade 🙂
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well you have an angel’s heart and your heart has an angel’s wings 🙂
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So my heart can fly free? 🙂
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yes it can!
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